Fantasy book lovers take a look at this.

Please anyone who likes.. loves… or even doesn’t mind fantasy book take a look at my currant novel as i need some feedback, all opinions welcome bad and good ones …

 

Small poem of love :)

Small poem of love

Every day it is you that I miss,
as each day passes I want it more.. That first kiss.
Holding you in my arms,
walking along with my hands on your palms.

I need you like I need my heart to beat,
to ever leave you would be an impossible feat.
To have you forever is my only wish,
your kisses will be so good they’ll become my favourite dish.

Your beauty is unmatched by anything I have ever seen,
and how great your personality is makes me very keen.
What makes me happy is with this I’m making you smile,
and only once I’ve got to see your amazing face just for a while.

No other girl has a chance with me baby because you own my heart,
and you may think I’m smart.
But I am dumb and the only thing I know that is true is that … baby I love you.

(plz use my new rating system under this and give it a star rating thanks for your time)

 

sorry guna start posting again…

Sorry i’m going to get back into the creative swing of things and start posting again i have to realy to get any were … (im very creative at the moment :/ and have wrote a song… i can’t sing tho so dunt like murder me when i post it)

 

Yea im a little late with this but the poll tally is in

Yes, i am late with this, but the poll tally is in. The decision has been made i am going to submit the story like i did before in segments, rather than waiting till im done a whole chapter. Thanks to all who voted and those who dunt know me already check out my story on my blog also i have poems.

 

Ode to my sweet Love by naivion

My newist poem as always all comments are welcome.

Ode to my sweet Love

For me to lay just one kiss,
upon thine’s lips it would be bliss.
From you everything had meaning a hug,
means lots from my little love bug.

When we meet and are together,
my heart will sing out i wish this was for ever.
When i hold you tight in my arms,
ill be sweating from my palms.

Out of pure anxiety and joy,
you could call me your toy.
I would care not as long as I’m something of yours,
you can sit there insult me and point out my flaws.

I would care not, but that is not like you anyway,
your lovely, sweet, kind and would not be mean any day,
I would sit with you, just sit with you all night,
in my mind we’d never get into a fight.

The point I’m trying to express,
is my love for you which I digress.
Is strong and everlasting, in my heart you shall remain till times end,
the time were apart it will take but one hug to mend.

I love you so dearly, and will cherish your love,
I believe in my eyes your beauty matches that of a dove,
This is a tribute to you my sweet,
one thing I’m glad you do not like feet.

 

Update on my blog .:)

Update on my blog .:) I have updated my blog recently, changed the theme and added the rating widget and the meebo one. So as well as comments people visiting can talk to me directly, and rate the pages easaly. If you have yet to read myh writing please check it out, i do poems and am writing a fantasy novel at the moment. The first chapter is on my blog called unnamed novel… chapter one at the side. please and thank you for your intrest.

 

Hi book lovers and fantasy lovers.

Hi to all those who love a good book and or poem, Im an aspiring author and i only ask that any one who may be intrested just take a look at my novel, if you comment or rate it i will be very happy (i reply to all comments).  comment and what on what you think about my work, once you have read it of corse. (also have some poems if u check out the catagory poems )

(As any other aspiring author/author will know it is not at all easy to atract attention to anything you have written simply because, noone likes people harrasing them to buy stuff all the time. im not asking anyone to buy anything just look at what i have written and then you decide your course of action, weather its comment, try and buy or even just carry on what ever you were doing prior to reading it.)

 

Change of plan

I have changed my mind it may be better for me if i do not post any more till i have finished the second chapter. (Note to all readers i am not posting the whole story just the first two chapters to see what people think)

Have your say on what i should do after reading the first chapter.

(voting finishes on the 11/07/09 (11nth of july) so vote quickly please other wise it may not go the way you want )

 

Added some to chapter two

I have added some of the novel to chapter two, not much but its somthing will do a lot  more tomorrow.

 

I have finished the site maintanance.

I have finished the maintanance on my blog, it is more organised and easier to use. for anyone intrested im looking for more comments on my novel that i’m currantly working on at the moment, one chapter is finished in draft form take a look and say what you feel. Chapter two is being worked on and a post or two by the end of today garenteed.  :)

(Hi to anyone reading this i have a face book group for those who like my stuff and those who wud call them selves my “fans” just search Naivion and you’ll find it thanks )