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Naivion — Tue, 15 Mar 2011 01:33:50 +0000

Loves last embrace

Stuck in an emotionless state,
feelings have wandered away.
is this truly my fate?
surly you can show me another way?

There is only one that i need,
my mind is always on you.
to your will it seems i will conceed,
with out you i have no idea what to do.

The only thing to describe the loss i’ve had,
is to say love stole eveything.
My heart, mind and feelings and left me less than sad,
It seems a long fall down of loves caring wing.

The Chosen Few

Naivion — Wed, 12 Jan 2011 16:44:42 +0000

I have made a rough front cover for my novel The Chosen Few, Oddly i seem to be getting a fair lot of intrest in it. If you have not had a look why not? you may like it if your into fantasy.

http://naivion.wordpress.com/my-novels/the-belonian-cronicals/unnamed-novel-chapter-one/

Life, trouble and strife

Naivion — Tue, 10 Aug 2010 12:33:21 +0000

I just sat down and this came to me

Life, trouble and strife

This life is a funny thing because it can feel horrible,
but can also be amazing at some other times.
It can become so difficult to think sensible,
As some americans say life is ment for making dollar’s and dimes.

Twisted perceptions of a fake reality is common place,
and in every single belief there is a lie.
Told what to believe and just going with the pace,
away from anarchy and disbelief most prefer to shy.

We should believe what makes sense to us,
and not take things just because we are told to.
Instead of just taking it all in and not making a fuss,
never just sit around as there is always something to do.

It seems it takes experianced eye’s to notice the beauty in everything,
as normally people either dont see it or just dont care.
some of the worlds beauty is that good you want to sing,
it also seems one of the hardest things is to share.

All the trivial things in life aside there is one goal to achieve,
this goal my friend is to enjoy your self.
even with the serious things and all the things you cant believe,
you must make sure you make the most of your time and good health.

Protected: My currant short story – The Village Of Atros

Naivion — Fri, 05 Feb 2010 14:05:53 +0000

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Hi an update ive added the re-write of the first chapter.

Naivion — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 16:03:20 +0000

Hi ive done the re-write of my first chapter of my currant novel… if you havnt read it yet take a look it isnt as much as a thought but the comment madei think ive sorted what they acked for … see if its any better

Update on chapter one …

Naivion — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 18:43:53 +0000

Ok people if you’ve readmy blog before you’ll know about my on going novel, well im adding a re-written verion of chapter one tomorrow… if you havnt read it read it now or come back tomorrow for the new version thanks for your time..

Update again :p

Naivion — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 22:33:43 +0000

I am re-writing my first chapter a bit as a very good suggestion was made to me by somone who commented… soon i’ll post the new version and you can all see what you think : thanks for your time and if you havn’ t already read my first chapter while your here thanks

Wow it seems im featured again :P

Naivion — Thu, 28 Jan 2010 10:08:54 +0000

Well it seems im featured again (In the writing tag)… last time i used the site regurlery i was a featured blog for two weeks in a row… now people shall we see if we can break that record? why not and if you have not read my blog well im a amature/ aspiring writer of the fantasy genre and if you like fantasy books take a look and give your opinion via comment or the star rating thanks for your time i look forward to your feed back…
Now all it seems we need to do is get my hits up high again … back to 100+ a day nd maybe if im very lucky beat my record of 280 hits in a day

Hi up an update here :P

Naivion — Wed, 27 Jan 2010 14:31:46 +0000

Ive decided that i am going ot just write the first book in draft and go through it a load of times… then see what people think to it once its almost done… still if you havn’t already have a read of it people tell me its good tell me your opinion by a comment or rating it thanks for your time… the links to the right on my blog by the way …

Hi i have updated my novel have a look if your into fantasy :)

Naivion — Mon, 25 Jan 2010 20:55:13 +0000

Hi i have updated my novel have a look if your into fantasy

Hi to anyone who likes fantasy books… please take a look and tell me what you think as im an aspiring writer and am looking for lots of opinions i will reply to all comments asap thanks for your time … to see my novel just look to the left on my blog and u’ll see the link …